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英语周记800字带翻译:我的作家老师

更新时间:2020/2/1 8:19:00  浏览量:311  

  时至今日,我印象最深的老师是我现在的语文老师张老师。

  Today, my most impressive teacher is my current Chinese teacher, Mr. Zhang.

  小学时,我的作文写得好,常被老师当作范文在班里宣读,所以,进入初中,当听说我新的语文老师是一位小有名气的作家并且非常重视学生作文的时候,我激动得要疯了。我相信,我很快就会获得张老师的青睐。

  When I was in primary school, my composition was well written and often read out in the class as a model by the teacher. Therefore, when I entered junior high school, I was crazy when I heard that my new Chinese teacher was a little famous writer and attached great importance to students' composition. I believe that I will be favored by Mr. Zhang soon.

  终于,张老师布置作文了,题目是《温暖的时刻》。我想都没想,展开作文本,埋下头,奋笔疾书。我边写边告诫自己:现在是初中生了,不能再像小学生那样只会用那么几个好词好句了,一定要多用些,多得让张老师不得不对我竖起大拇指。

  Finally, Mr. Zhang arranged the composition, the title is "warm moment". I didn't even think about it. I started my composition, buried my head, and wrote fast. As I wrote, I warned myself: now I am a junior high school student. I can't just use so many words and sentences as a primary school student. I must use more words and sentences, so that Miss Zhang has to give me a thumbs up.

  一个小时后,一篇近两千字的作文赫然&矗立&在我的作文本上。其他同学呢?一个个还在眉头紧锁、痛苦万分地往作文本上&挤牙膏&。我笑了,我赢定了!

  An hour later, a nearly two thousand word composition "stands" on my composition. What about the other students? One by one is still frowning, painfully to the composition of the "toothpaste squeeze.". I laugh. I'll win!

  几天后的作文评讲课上,张老师将作文本分成两叠,一叠多,另一叠少。我知道少的那叠一定是好的,其中嘛,肯定有我的!果不其然,张老师从少的那叠里拿起一本作文开始评讲,可并不是我的。&没事,第二本就是我的!&我依然自信满满,得意扬扬。

  A few days later in the composition review lecture, Mr. Zhang divided the composition into two stacks, one is more, the other is less. I know that the few stacks must be good, among them, there must be mine! Sure enough, Mr. Zhang picked up a composition from the small pile and began to comment, but it's not mine. "It's OK. The second one is mine!" I'm still confident and proud.

  第二本,第三本好作文都评讲完了,其中还有小学时作文遠不如我的同学的作文,可就是没有我的!

  The second, the third All the good compositions have been commented, among them, the compositions in primary school are far inferior to those of my classmates, but there is no me!

  愤怒让我失去了理智,我站起来大声说:&老师,您说,我的作文,哪里不好?&

  Anger made me lose my sense. I stood up and said loudly, "teacher, you said, what's wrong with my composition?"

  张老师很吃惊,立即找出我的作文本,打开,看了看,仿佛很惊喜:&哦,我弄错了,丁颖同学的作文的确很好!尤其是一些词句,很优美&

  Mr. Zhang was surprised. He immediately found out my composition book, opened it and looked at it, as if it was a surprise: "Oh, I made a mistake, Ding Ying's composition is really good! Especially some words and sentences, very beautiful... "

  &就是嘛!这才像作家嘛&我想着,刚刚的愤怒早已变成了沾沾自喜。

  "That's it! It's like a writer... " I thought that the anger just now had already turned into complacency.

  下课了,张老师把我叫到办公室,让我坐到他的面前,说:&丁颖同学,有一个人很美,但总是头上戴着一层又一层美丽的帽子,身上穿着一件又一件华贵的衣服,手上的戒指、手链数都数不清。你说,这个人还美吗?&

  After class, Mr. Zhang called me to the office and asked me to sit in front of him. He said: "Ding Ying, one of us is very beautiful, but he always wears beautiful hats one by one, gorgeous clothes one by one, countless rings and bracelets on his hands. Do you think this man is beautiful? "

  &不美,难看死了!&我不假思索地说。

  "It's not beautiful. It's ugly!" I said without thinking.

  &哦,那你看,一篇作文,如果什么内容都没有而仅仅是一些所谓的好词好句,它还能是一篇好作文吗?&

  "Oh, look, can a composition be a good composition if there is nothing but some so-called good words and sentences?"

  &不能。&我突然顿住了,&老师,您&

  "No," I suddenly stopped, "teacher, y

  张老师拿起我的作文本说:&丁颖,你这篇作文的确有很多好词句,甚至可以说全是好词句,但是,你的内容呢?你想说什么呢?老师看不出。&张老师轻轻合上作文本,继续说,&好词句的确能给作文添彩,但一味追求好词句就必然导致作文华而不实,空洞无物。丁颖你记着,好作文不一定都得有好词句,朴素易懂的语句同样能铸就好作文。学习和做人其实也一样&

  Mr. Zhang picked up my composition and said, "Ding Ying, there are many good words and sentences in your composition, even all of them are good words and sentences, but what about your content? What do you want to say? The teacher can't see. " Mr. Zhang closed the composition book gently and continued, "good words and sentences can indeed add color to the composition, but the pursuit of good words and sentences will inevitably lead to the composition being flashy and empty. Ding Ying, remember that good writing doesn't have to have good words and sentences. Simple and easy to understand sentences can also make a good composition. Learning and being human are the same... "

  我满脸羞愧,为了照顾我的自尊心,课堂上,张老师并没有计较我的&无知无畏&,反而给了我鼓励。他教给我的,不仅仅是怎样写作文啊!

  My face is full of shame. In order to take care of my self-esteem, in class, Mr. Zhang didn't care about my "ignorance and fearlessness", but encouraged me. What he taught me is not just how to write a composition!

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